I was reading Ian O’Byrne’s week two introduction to Revolutionary Poets Society It occurred to me that a digital revolutionary might use a digital tool to respond. Et voila, Hypothes.is, the perfect tool for kibitzing from the sides. It is, of course, raw, unpolished, and grossly ‘approximate’ , but it is not intended as being hard-hearted although it has a dark view of hope tinged by having lived through the accomplished lie of Obama’s hope and change.

So here it is in a slightly more polished form taken from within an etherpad and embedded here:

This version is from the other side of the margins, twice removed from the source.